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    A poem about leaving your friend behind...

    Swish
    Swish


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    Post by Swish Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:56 pm

    Woah Look at the Sun
    Looks like it's gonna be a great day to have some fun
    I ran out the door without a doubt
    But I left something very important out
    I looked every where but just couldnt see
    What in the world could it possibly be?
    I kept om playing with such delight
    I felt my soul soar to extreme hights
    The night came along and the moon was full
    It was so beautifull, but I could still feel a nagging pull
    There was something missing, or could it be someone?
    Then I just remembered when the day was done
    I couldn't believe I had so much fun
    With-out my friend Hun.


    My second Poem Razz couldn't think of any more poems, and No i don't have a friend called Hun And whats a cool Title?


    Last edited by Swish on Sun Apr 05, 2009 5:27 am; edited 1 time in total
    Fancy pants
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    Post by Fancy pants Sat Apr 04, 2009 8:12 pm

    Try to change the friends name or something lol cause saying hun just to ryhme with fun doesnt work with me but anyways
    Good Poem
    I think we found literacy artist
    (But Thats Just me)
    Swish
    Swish


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    Post by Swish Sat Apr 04, 2009 8:14 pm

    Fancy pants wrote:
    I think we found literacy artist
    Thanks, I didn't know what else to put in it Razz
    Ill try think of something.
    ace
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    Post by ace Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:22 am

    nice swish didnt know you were so poetic!

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